Sunday, 19 June 2016

The Dawn

With wet eyes she looked at the horizon. The sky was exhibiting the shades of colors nature had. She felt like nature was mocking her black and while life by showing all the possible permutation of blee. At the distant, a ship which had just started its voyage with a hope to reach the destination was in speculation still. A couple was immersed into each other isolating themselves from rest of the world. It reminded her of them, of him, being together. It had been about two months since he left. In more appropriate way, since god deprived him from her. This was the place they used to come most often. Since he wasn’t anymore, she hasn’t come here.

Foggy pictures of memories she had, of them, flashed through her eyes. How they met as strangers, how they had their first conversation, how they became acquainted from unknowns, and finally a single soul from two different souls. She still wasn’t able to believe what happened. The person, whom she had loved more than anyone else, whom she had trusted more than anyone else, with whom she had envisaged her entire life, left her. A single unfortunate moment stole the most precious thing from her. It was an accident which took him away from her. Neither in miles nor for the days, it snatched him to the different world leaving her alone in this world to survive without him. That meant she has to live her entire life without him, with memories only. Memories of their dates, that wait for him, that long walks, those silly fights. She missed a heartbeat realising there will be no more dates accompanied by gentle kiss full of grace, no more squabbles ending by tight hug full of warmth, no more walks on the street holding hands of each other amidst darkness of the night. It seemed impossible for her to live without him.

Seeing towards horizon, thinking about him, she felt something. Amid the roar and crash of the surf, she found a deep calmness. That tranquillity was telling her something, was reminding her of feeling she used to have being wrapped in his arms. That peace, that obliviousness of the rest world, all those feelings she used to experience being with him, she felt then. For a moment, she felt his presence there. She felt his strong vibe there. She couldn’t see him but strongly felt him. It gave her goose bumps. In a moment, it all gone away. But something has changed. She found herself back at the beach again, alone, amid the world full of hallucination, but a different one. Instead of being indulged in misery and sorrow, she found herself full of happiness and enthusiasm. From a saturnine to an effervescent. That sudden change, she knew it wasn’t accidental. She knew it was him. Yes for sure, it was him. She knew her love had pulled him from transcendental world to this inferior world. He always wanted her to live the life with passion. From the entire different world also, he pulled her girl back from ocean of gloom to the sky full of happiness. He indeed proved the worth of love, a pure love.

She realized it was getting dark. With a gentle smile, she stood up. Making her from a gloomy to a fanatic one, though it was a twilight, it turned out a dawn for her. A dawn of her life…!

6 comments:

  1. I loved the way you narrated the pure form of love. I used to write about love but today I read words justifying definition of love.
    Good to see you again with such a marvelous story.

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  2. Thanks a lot bhai.
    Hope i ll continue with it.
    P.S. u inspired this time.

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  3. The surrounding weather is described in an excellent way and then beautifully defined 'pure love'.

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  4. Very well and meticulously written. Really its laudable. Keep writing. :)

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    1. Thnks a lot brother.
      Will try best next time also.

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